Model compositions

Real compositions written by primary school students, picked for the techniques and phrases worth borrowing.

A model P6 composition by Samhita: ""Do you know that in our Changi beach, there were 50 kilograms of plastic and waste lying around the beach?"

By Samhita

A model P6 composition by Liam: "Lily sat at her desk, her eyes fixed on the letter inviting her to the Maths Olympiad."

By Liam

A model P6 composition by Ryan: "The tantalising aroma of chicken rice, fish ball noodles, and western dishes wafted through the air, teasing..."

By Ryan

A model P6 composition by Shrilakshmi: "A thousand eyes bored straight into me."

By Shrilakshmi

A model P5 composition by Lim Yuzhe: "As I gazed up at the night sky, the stars twinkled like diamonds scattered across a velvet canvas."

By Lim Yuzhe

A model P6 composition by Cius: "The morning sun filtered through the kitchen window, casting a warm, golden glow over the well-worn recipe..."

By Cius

A model P4 composition by Zhi Xuan: "Since I was young, I had always been quite selfish, reluctant to share my toys or food with others."

By Zhi Xuan

A model P6 composition by Jaylon Leow: "As the morning sun cast a golden glow through the curtains, my father's voice resonated with excitement,..."

By Jaylon Leow

A model P6 composition by Zelia: "As the morning sun bathed the classroom in a warm glow, our music teacher, Mrs."

By Zelia

A model P3 composition by Ichiro: "“I need some space!” I declared, my emotions a whirlwind of anger and confusion."

By Ichiro

A model P5 composition by Nuur Syahirah: "“Look at that butterfly!"

By Nuur Syahirah

A model P5 composition by Alexandria: "It was a resplendent Sunday morning, the kind where the sun's rays danced through the curtains, casting..."

By Alexandria

A model P6 composition by Skyler: ""Ring!" The shrill school bell rang with a resounding clang, reverberating throughout the school, sliced..."

By Skyler