Shrilakshmi, P6
February 2, 2025

An Embarrassing Moment

A thousand eyes bored straight into me. I stood there, frozen, not knowing what to do. My face flushed with embarrassment, and I felt an overwhelming urge to dig a hole and hide. The microphone slipped from my clammy hands, letting out an ear-piercing screech that echoed through the auditorium (5 Senses).

Just a few days earlier, I had been walking past the school noticeboard when a bright, eye-catching poster caught my attention. It read, “Singing Competition 2025.” I paused, contemplating, "Should I sign up for this contest? Will I do well if I do?" (Character's Thoughts) Despite my doubts, the dream of becoming a famous singer tugged at my heart. With a deep breath, I decided, "Yes, I will sign up."

From that moment, I practised tirelessly, day and night, memorising the lyrics and perfecting my pitch. The upcoming competition loomed large in my mind, and I was plagued by the fear of making a fool of myself. Yet, my mother’s encouraging words echoed in my ears, "You sing beautifully, my dear." Her belief in me was a balm to my nerves, though butterflies still fluttered in my stomach.

The day of the competition arrived, and I scurried onto the stage, my heart pounding as if it might leap from my chest (Show-not-tell). The spotlight was blinding, and I stood in the centre, taking a deep breath before starting to sing the first few lines of my song. Suddenly, my mind went blank. I forgot the next line! Panic surged through me as I saw the audience's eyes fixed on me, waiting. The judges exchanged glances, their expressions unreadable. In my mind, a sinister voice taunted, "Why are you doing something you can't do? Why are you being such a loser?" But I refused to be defeated.

Determined, I bent down to retrieve the fallen microphone, my hands trembling. I closed my eyes, blocking out the world, and focused on the music. Slowly, the next line came to me, and then the rest flowed naturally. I opened my eyes as I sang the final line, and to my surprise, I saw the audience swaying to the melody, some even wiping away tears, moved by the song's emotion. The last high notes lingered in the air before the auditorium erupted in rapturous applause. I bowed shyly, my heart swelling with a mix of relief and joy, and hurried off the stage.

To my astonishment, I won second place! The judges had deducted some marks due to my moment of hesitation, but that did not matter much to me. What mattered most was that I had mustered the courage to continue and not give up. This experience taught me a valuable lesson about resilience and self-belief, a creed I would carry with me for many years to come. (Reflection at the end about learning from the experience and valuing courage over winning is a strong conclusion!)

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