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P5CompositionBeing responsible

A model P5 composition on being responsible

The question

Write a composition about a time when you had to be responsible.

Marked on the exam rubricAL1
Content18 / 20
Language16 / 20

The school bell had not yet rungstrong hook when I realised my little brother had left his reading folder at home.

I had a choice to make. I knew that I should went backtense slip for it, even though it meant being late.

Why this works

The opening earns content marks by setting up a clear dilemma in the first two sentences, and language marks for a vivid time reference instead of a flat "One day".

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